Monday, December 23, 2013

A Clockwork Christmas



I thought it would be easy doing this story on a tab, never have I been so wrong... I hope you enjoy my Christmas tale, this mostly is done in one night without 


The Tinker’s Christmas Miracle


In the midst of a gentle snowstorm, the streets lay empty save for a few lost souls trudging through the late-night flurry. Fresh snow blanketed the cobblestones of this forgotten London neighborhood, glittering like diamonds under the soft glow of street lamps. It was Christmas Eve, but the children here dreamed of gifts that would never come. Santa had long abandoned these parts—not since the shipping yards closed, work drifted overseas, and families fought to keep roofs over their heads, let alone food on the table. Blinds stayed shut against the cold, with only slivers of light—like fading childhood hopes—peeking through.
High on the third floor of a crumbling rooming house lived Charles, a tinker and a shut-in. His only friends were the toys he crafted on sleepless nights. Once, he’d been the finest pocket-watch maker in the land, his gears ticking as smooth as time itself. Now, digital watches had stolen his trade, leaving him to fix automated conveyors that robbed more jobs from the people. At his desk, a candle flickered with faint heat and light as he worked on his passion. Around him sprawled a whimsical menagerie of clockwork creatures: a hummingbird gleaming above his bed, a small ape slouched on a shelf, toy soldiers poised in ranks, a bat with wide wings, a pig with huge eyes and a curly tail. A lonely giraffe drooped its head, an owl grinned upside-down, and in his hands rested a knight in shining armor—his hero, Sir Michael.
“Time’s running late,” Charles muttered, glancing at the watch on the wall. “If I don’t finish you soon, who’ll deliver you by morning?” He twisted the key in the knight’s back and set it on the desk. Sir Michael drew its tiny sword and marched back and forth. “If only you could help me, this’d be easier.” He grabbed his coat and hat, pausing as the knight teetered near the desk’s edge. “If I only had more time,” he whispered. A tear rolled down his cheek, splashing the watch’s glass and dripping onto the knight. “I’ll be back before tomorrow—then we’ll find you all a home.”
He opened the door, giving his creations one last look—so much love poured into them, born from a mission he could barely recall. As he slammed it shut, the shutter snapped open, a breeze snuffing out the candle. A full moon shone through the grimy window, its light reflecting off his marvelous toys. Charles trudged downstairs, nodding to Miss Daughtry, the night receptionist. “Good evening,” he said, lifting his collar against the cold as he stepped into the night.
At the Dolphin Cannery, Mr. Finkelstein paced like a tyrant, grumpier than ever. Closing for Christmas always soured his mood, and he paid his workers scraps to begin with. The cleaning crew dodged him as he stormed the floor. A young man with a broom—Bryer—crossed his path. “What are you doing, maggot?” Finkelstein barked. “I told you to clean the gutters in the cutting room!”
“I was on my way, sir,” Bryer stammered. “Just grabbing an apron—”
“Did I offer you a smock, boy? Use your own rags and get to those fish guts!” Finkelstein snapped. “If your mother weren’t my sister, you’d be out in the cold like her. Your drunk of a father could’ve kept his job if he’d listened half as well. Now move before I fire you too—this isn’t a charity!”
“Yes, sir,” Bryer mumbled, hurrying off.
Charles arrived five minutes late, the clock striking 12:05 as he slipped inside. Finkelstein loomed atop the conveyor structure, lording over his domain. “You’re late, tinker!” he bellowed. “That’s an hour’s wage docked for your sin.”
“Only five minutes, sir,” Charles said, pocketing his watch.
“No excuses! And you’ll work all day tomorrow too—my order’s shipping out while these lazy sods laze with their families,” Finkelstein spat. “Got a problem?”
“I’ve plans tomorrow, sir,” Charles ventured. “I need to finish my work—”
“Like your job, tinker? I pay your rent too. Keep whining, and you’ll be out on the street. Those toys of yours? A waste of time. Build me machines instead—then I won’t need these miserable meat sacks!” He sneered at the workers below.
“They’ve got families, homes to keep,” Charles protested.
“I don’t care about their filth! It’s 12:10, and you’ve done nothing—another hour off your wages. One more minute in my shadow, and you’re jobless. Move!”
Mumbling curses about Finkelstein’s arrogance, Charles knelt by a worn conveyor. “Gone mad yet, tinker?” a voice chirped. He turned to see Summer, the maid Cynthia’s bright-eyed daughter, offering a glass of water.
“Just my usual ranting,” he said with a wry smile, bowing. “Thanks, my lady. Where’s your mother?”
“Upstairs, dodging his grubby paws,” Summer sighed.
“That weasel doesn’t deserve her,” Charles growled. “A man should treat a woman with honor.”
“He owns us, feeds us,” she shrugged. “Since Dad died in debt, the courts bound us to him.”
“You should be in school, sharp as you are,” Charles said, handing back the glass.
“Dreams don’t pay, Mr. Tinker. We get this instead.” She waved at the dingy factory.
“Believe, Summer—especially tonight. Christmas wishes are the strongest.”
She giggled. “You’re full of it. Mom says you’re a dreamer.”
“Does she now?” he teased.
“More than that, but I’m not to badmouth elders. Get back to work before he catches you. Bye—Mom says she loves you. Meet her at three in the broom closet.”
“I will, my lady. Now go read a book—don’t waste that mind on floors. And I’ll hush my muttering before everyone thinks I’m mad.”
“Crazy knows crazy,” she winked, darting off.
At 2:56, the factory fell silent—Finkelstein likely counting his coins. Charles shed his tool belt, hanging it on a lever, and dashed to meet Cynthia. The belt tugged the lever down, and the conveyor rumbled to life.
“My love,” he whispered in the closet, “was he cruel tonight?”
“No talk of him,” Cynthia said, kissing him. “The toys—finished?”
“Just in time for Christmas. But he’s working me through tomorrow—I can’t deliver them.”
“The kids won’t mind,” she soothed. “It’s the thought that counts. I’ve saved bread and wine for the parents—we’ll hand them out together with Summer.”
“You’re a queen among us,” he said, pulling her close. “Kiss me again before I go.”
Their lips met, her whisper of “I love—” cut short as the door flew open.
“What the bloody hell?” Finkelstein roared. Cynthia shoved Charles back, but the boss slapped her hard. “Shut it, temptress!”
Rage flared in Charles. He shielded her and punched Finkelstein square in the nose. “Touch her again, and I’ll do worse!”
“Stop!” Cynthia cried as Finkelstein staggered, blood dripping. “Please, sir—”
“Rash, eh?” he snarled, kicking Charles into the closet and slamming the door. He locked it with a sneer, dialing the wall phone. “Officer, Finkelstein at the cannery. Caught two thieves—one assaulted me. They’re in the broom closet, locked tight. Hurry—I want them hung by morning. Judge Finkelstein’ll rush it.” He stormed off.
Summer rushed in, hearing the commotion. “Mom? What’s happening?” She pounded the closet door.
Finkelstein leered. “Say goodbye to your wench of a mother and her fool. I wanted her, but I’ll wait for you.” He laughed, striding away.
“Summer, run!” Cynthia begged. “I can’t protect you from here!”
“No, Mom!” Summer sobbed.
Charles slid a key under the door. “Take this—get to my place. Tell them you’re picking up my night bag. Money’s under the mattress—use it to escape.”
“I can’t leave you!” she wailed.
Bryer burst in. “What’s going on? Who’s trapped?”
“Peter!” Charles called. “Get her out—keep her safe!”
“I’m here too,” Cynthia added. “Please, don’t get caught.”
Bryer grabbed Summer, muffling her cries. “Shh—we’ll sneak out the back. Be quiet.”
Through tears, Summer clutched Cynthia’s fingers poking under the door. “Be safe,” her mother whispered. Bryer pulled her away.
“Where’s your coat?” he asked.
“Upstairs,” she said. “I’ll grab it.”
“Be quick. I’ll get the garbage room keys—you’ll slide out the chute. It stinks, so bag your things tight.”
Summer packed her favorite dress, pants, coat, and boots, sealing them in plastic. She crept downstairs to meet Bryer. He pressed a handful of change into her palm. “All I’ve got—stay warm. Find me at the Davenport Lane hostel if you need me.” He opened the chute, helping her in. “Be careful—no strangers.”
She hugged him, then slid down, gagging at the reek of fish guts and rot. In the alley, the cold bit deep, but Charles’ place wasn’t far. She ran, spotting Miss Daughtry shuffle to the kitchen. Summer slipped inside, up the stairs, and into Charles’ room, locking the door. Snow trailed behind her, unnoticed as Miss Daughtry returned to her tea, grumbling about muddy carpets.
Summer sank onto the bed, kicking off her shoes. Tears fell as she gazed at the moon. “If anyone’s listening, I need help. Mom’s locked away, and I’m scared. Please, Christmas spirit, light of the moon—save her and Mr. Charles.” She buried herself under the blanket.
On the desk, Sir Michael stood frozen, sword raised. A spark flared in its gears. The blade slipped into its sheath as the knight sat up, lifting its arms. “What is this?” it chimed, voice a soft ring of metal. “Where am I? Why so small?”
Moonlight danced across its armor as it blinked its polished eyes. Summer’s prayer echoed in its core. “A damsel in need, and a tinker worth saving. My duty calls.” It hopped to the floor, surveying the room. The hummingbird fluttered, the ape straightened, the owl’s head spun upright. “Friends of the workshop,” Sir Michael declared, raising its sword, “our maker needs us. The girl’s wish has sparked us alive—let’s bring them home.”
The toys stirred, gears whirring. The bat stretched its wings, the giraffe lifted its neck, the soldiers snapped to attention. A tiny legion rallied behind the knight, their steps clumsy but eager. Summer murmured in sleep, deaf to their march.
Sir Michael led them to the door, the bat prying it open. They slipped past Miss Daughtry’s snores and into the snowy night, snowflakes dusting their metal hides. At the cannery, two officers lounged by the closet, chuckling as Finkelstein nursed his nose. “Judge’ll string ‘em up,” he sneered.
Inside, Charles held Cynthia. “I’d fight him again,” he whispered. She smiled. “You’re mine, mad or not.”
A rustle broke the quiet. The officers yelped as the ape lobbed a wrench, the bat swooped, and the soldiers fired darts. Finkelstein gaped as Sir Michael strode forward. “Witchcraft!” he shrieked, tumbling into tuna cans as the pig nudged his legs. The giraffe nudged the keyhole, the owl pecked, and the lock clicked free.
Charles stared. “Sir Michael? You’re… alive?” The knight tipped its helm. “Your love woke us, tinker. The girl’s hope set us free.” Cynthia pulled him out, tears shining. The toys parted, and the couple fled, Finkelstein’s curses fading.
Dawn broke as they reached the rooming house, snow slowing to a drift. Summer stumbled downstairs. “Mom! Charles!” She leapt into their arms, sobbing with joy. The toys filed in, Sir Michael at the lead, gleaming with pride. “Your little army,” Charles said, voice thick, “gave us a miracle.”
The sun rose, gilding the sky. With Cynthia’s bread and wine, Summer’s quick hands, and Charles’ toys, they slipped through the neighborhood, knocking on doors. Children squealed as knights, hummingbirds, and giraffes landed in their arms—small wonders from a tinker’s heart. Parents clasped warm loaves, sipping wine with grateful smiles, their blinds creaking open.
By noon, the street hummed with life—kids raced with toys, neighbors shared stories over steaming cups. Miss Daughtry offered tea to all, baffled but beaming. Bryer joined, free of the cannery, grinning shyly. Finkelstein, trapped in his factory, ranted about “living toys” until police hauled him off, dismissed as drunk by a skeptical judge.
Back in the room, Charles set Sir Michael on the desk, the toys now still but radiant. “You gave us more than a night,” he said, arm around Cynthia. Summer nestled close, clutching her owl. “Best Christmas ever,” she whispered. Cynthia kissed Charles. “A wish come true.”
Outside, the snow settled, and the street lamps shone like stars. The neighborhood, once dimmed by hardship, glowed anew—not with riches, but with warmth, with hope. And high above, the moon seemed to smile, having heard a little girl’s prayer after all.

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